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Computers Will Fool Us      The Dead Whisper On      I could be old-fashioned      Talking about rejection again      I Don't Get It      Had a Nice Birthday      God Talking to Me      Church Conflict      Barnes and Noble Test      Philly Report      Not only with words . . . but also with power!      Laugh-in As a Writing Lesson?     Satan's in your Inbox      No Guarantee of Tomorrow      A New Client List      A Mobile Office      Ashamed of Legislators      To Dance in the Desert      The Hair Shirt      Harry Potter – friend or foe?      One Step Over the Border      Information Overload      I've Been to the 'People Store'      Back in the Saddle Again      International Christian Retailers Show      Message from God      Holidays can be Distractions      Always or Never?      It's a Guy Thing      Voters are Bigots      It's All About People      Manuscript Guidelines      It's you job to sell them      Meet you in Philadelphia      Website Record      Day of Happy – Day of Sad      I Don't Want to Know      Back in the Dorm      Packing      New Industry Numbers      How Much is Enough?      4 Day Weekend Working Proposals      Conference Aftermath      Colorado Christian Writers      Headed to the mountains      They don't wanna read my stuff      Changing Character Names      Top Ten List for Short Fiction      Turn the other cheek       End Times?      Classic Submission      profanity     Encouragement      POD Bias?

     Entertain Angels Unaware?      Leave the VT Kids Alone      Hardest Rejections      Re-affirmation      First Fiction      Guest Blogging again      New Western site      Speaking Modules      Facing the Giants Lions      WIN      Road Trip      Still more on books for boys      More on books for boys      Workaholics      No Fridays      Politics      Publisher Migration     I Like Faces     Hanging out     Meeting Will Rogers     New Interview     The Publishing industry     Thoughts on queries     I don't do subtle well.    

 

 

 

    Computers will fool us

 

When there is a problem with a computer or with a computer program, the largest key to being able to fix it is deciphering the clues the computer gives us. Ruling out things it can't be by simple tests. For example my email quit working. The first step there is always resetting the wireless router. Still no. Ah, the internet is still working. That means it has to be the email server itself. Plug in the wireless card and try through it. Works. That means it has to be the email interface. Now I'm ready to call them.

 

I watch the computer geeks work through problems like this. Of course if we use online support the hardware people will automatically say it is the program. The program people will say it's hardware, and of course the internet server people will blame both. I once got all three online on a conference call before I could actually get the problem solved. They could no longer blame each other that way.

 

Sometimes the obvious isn't so obvious. Yesterday I decided to reset my mail delivery options so even though I have to use several mail addresses to send depending on which server I am on, they would all show one email return address. Less confusing for people. It seemed to work fine. I went to yahoo groups to set all the groups that I'm in to recognize it. Email immediately quit coming. I worked on it and worked on it and spent far more time than I had planned on investing in the project. Time I really didn't have to spend. Later I found out it wasn't what I had done at all when yahoo sent a note out that they had experienced some mail delivery problems which would be fixed shortly. It was just a coincidence that it happened just as I changed my settings. Spent hours on something that I didn't do and couldn't fix because I read the 'clues' wrong.

 

Who knew?



    The Dead Whisper On

                           Book Review:

 

Candace "Canada Mac" MacHugh lives a ghost of her former life.

Once a proud Butte, Montana, miner who daily risked her life setting explosives, she's now a garbage collector in her dying hometown.

Her beloved father is dead and she doesn't speak to her  mom. More than anything, Candace Mac misses her father. He promised to contact her from the "other side" if he could...but it's been eleven long years. And now even her beloved city of Butte, Montana, seems to be dying off.

Candace Mac is alone. Longing for the past. Dreaming of making a difference.

Until one night when her father's voice speaks to her from the shadows. Bud MacHugh's trademark growl. The dead, it seems, have messages they hunger to share with the world...warnings of impending disasters and grave danger. Of cities doomed to burn.

 

About the Author:  Tony is the author of the acclaimed Waking Lazarus. He has been an advertising agency owner/principal, a trade amgazine editor, and now a novelist.

He has been a professional writer for more than 15 years with articles appearing in publications as varied as Log Homes, Conservative Theological Journal, and Travel & Leisure. He is also Creative Director at Montana's largest advertising agency.

His long list of past odd jobs includes trimming Christmas trees, sorting seed potatoes, working the graveyard shift at a convenience store, and cleaning cadaver storage rooms.

 

    I could be old-fashioned

 

Could be? Is the Pope Catholic? Of course I'm old-fashioned. I'll admit it. We were talking about  church attire in Sunday School this past Sunday. Our church is pretty casual. There are like 6-8 men who wear a suit and tie.

 

I'm one of them.

 

The point was made that God doesn't care whether we wear a tie or shorts and sandals if we are genuinely there to worship. I can't argue with that.  I do believe God looks at the heart, not the clothes.  But I've worn a suit and tie to church since before I was a teenager. I don't wear them to impress anybody. It doesn't concern me what others wear, if they are dressed comfortably and are in the right spirit to worship then their attire doesn't matter to me. I'm not trying to win anybody over.

 

You see, I wear a suit and tie for ME! In my family we went to church in our very best, at least for the main service. In the evening we dress a little more casually. I still dress for church, and always will. To me it is a mark of respect. If I were called to an event before the Queen of England or the President of the United States, I wouldn't go in blue jeans and a T-shirt. (Well, unless Bush was throwing a BBQ) I figure God should command much more respect than both of those.

 

It comes up every so often as if people think I'm implying they aren't being worshipful by not dressing up. Nothing could be further from the truth. It isn't about anyone else, it's about me.  It's ONLY about what I want to do to come into the house of God.

 

Thought I'd share that and see if anybody else runs into this sort of thing.

 

 

Talking about rejection again

 

For me rejection is when somebody tells me I have body odor and my mother dresses me funny. It's personal. The dictionary says it is to repudiate,  throw out or discard.

 

Very personal.

 

We take them hard when one of two things happen, we got our hopes up too much, or when we take the response too personally.

 

When an editor or agent responds it can't be personal, they don't know us that well. It HAS to simply be about the fit of the project we are proposing to the market or markets that they are working in. They either fit or they dont. The timing is either right or it isn't. Nothing personal about that. I call those negative market reports and I've had a ton of them. I loved the comment that God had just disqualified another opportunity that was not right for the author. Good comment.

 

Get our hopes up too much? Sometimes that's hard to prevent. We research the markets we are pitching and one seems so absolutely right that we just know it's going to work. Been there, done that, have the T-shirt. In fact I have a drawer full of the T-shirts. Maybe the market looked just right because we found such great pointers that they were publishing just what we were offering - without thinking that meant they had just done it and wouldn't want to do it again for a while. Publishing is all about having the right product at exactly the right place at precisely the right time and in the hands of the person empowered to make the decision. At any time maybe only one place exists in the whole industry where those pieces are in place. Within a very short period of time that window is closed and there is another place that is exactly right. The process guarantees a lot of missed opportunities. Too early, too late, a lot of things can happen.

 

How do we keep our hopes from being too high? Write the next project and get it out. Like a fisherman, the more lines we have in the water the better the chances of landing the big fish, and the less time we spend watching any one bobber bouncing on the waves because we're busy watching them all.

 

Easier said than done? Sure. But if it was easy everybody would be doing it.

 

 

      I Don't Get It

 

I just got through going through my submissions log and moving those that I am waiting on a response that are more than six months old to the inactive file. There were over 50 of them.

 

I don't get it. Someone spends the money to come to a conference, takes the time to make and keep an appointment, arouses my interest, maybe even gets past the query or proposal stage, then fails to follow up. I'd like to think perhaps they all found another agent or publisher but I sincerely doubt that is true. People are pretty good about dropping me a note if they publish or decide to go with somebody else. Believe it or not I'm happy to hear of such successes.

 

So what's the deal? Why go to that much work and not take the final step?  Procrastination is probably the big one, they just don't get around to it. That's a shame. Some may do it yet and I'll have to dig it out of the inactive file, only then as I read it I'll have questions in the back of my mind about whether they can work with a deadline or not.

 

Some get scared of success. They are generating interest and it might just work out . . . then they'd have to get out and do public events and promote, and that scares them so they sabotage their own efforts. It happens, I've talked to a number of them in my "Too shy to pitch or promote" program.

 

Cold feet? Could be one reason, when they get down to it they decide it just isn't good enough and are afraid to risk rejection. They shouldn't be, I get notes back on how great my responses are even if I'm not interested. I may disappoint but I doubt that I'll hurt their feelings. Or maybe they've already gotten a number of those rejections and have given up, don't even want to try again. That happens too.

 

Life could have just interfered, family, illness, there could be lots of things, but when that sort of thing happens I tell them to take their time. I want them to wait until it is just right to send it, and believe me there is no rush on my end. I just want to know it is still in play. 

 

Maybe I do get it.

 

Had A Nice Birthday

 

I got phone calls, emails and cards all day long. Granted some of them were a little rough on me. You'd think turning 65 meant you had one foot in the grave. Saundra and mother took me out to eat at a nice restaurant. That's what we do. If there is an occasion, we eat. I mean, it's no accident that I can't see my belt buckle.

 

Some of the most faithful were the grandkids – phone calls from nearly all of them. That was terrific. It was the cousins that gave me the most trouble. I'm the senior cousin, the head man, and I should command more respect. Besides that, since I hit it first it is a serious tactical error to do anything to me they do not wish to see repeated in spades when they come ambling up the path behind me. Serious error.

 

You would think they would have learned when I turned 40. There was a big ambush then which gave me plenty of time to plan my retaliation. I did. But I suppose 25 years was ample time to forget that lesson. It appears it will have to be taught again. Be afraid, cuz, be very afraid.

 

Thanks to all of those who took the time to send me a note, I really appreciated it. Birthdays are not something we celebrate much but I suppose this one merited notice. We don't have a guarantee on longevity in this life, not even of tomorrow. Still, mother is 93, Grandad Ward lived to be a couple of months short of 106, aunts and uncles pushing 90, I guess the odds are I've still got a few good years left.

 

So put the black balloons away, I plan to be here for a while. 

 

          God Talking to Me

 

For the time will come when they will not endure sound

doctrine; but after their own lusts shall they heap to

themselves teachers, having itching ears.

                                             2 Timothy 4:1-3 KJV

 

This verse came up in Sunday School. I took it at face value for how it amplified the lesson. Shortly after that it was mentioned in the sermon in the morning service in a bit of a different context, but it caught my attention that it was showing up again. Later that afternoon it was used to make a different point in discipleship training.

 

I asked the pastor why he had focused on that verse so much and he was surprised, not really aware he had used it three times. Okay, anything in the Bible repeated three times does it for major emphasis. I was now pretty sure it wasn't something the preacher was intentionally doing.

 

Each day the International Bible Society puts a verse on on my web page. I have no control over it and have no idea what the verse will be, but it surprises me how often it seems directed right at me. Want to hazard a guess what the verse is today? I was stunned.

 

If you've read the writing terstimony on my website you know that God used this sort of affirmation to tell me how He wanted me to use my writing for Him. He does it periodically when He wants a point to come through to me loud and clear. That point ends up being affirmed several ways. Saundra and I went through the "Experiencing God" course to learn how to better understand and see these affirmations.

 

What am I supposed to be getting from it? At a conference in Colorado a speaker talked about the unprecedented opportunity for Christian books, fiction and non-fiction, but that the opportunity would be of limited duration. There could be a whole large dissertation on why that opportunity is here and why it will increase, but I think this IS a reminder that the window will close. We have to get as much out there as we can, reach all the people we can, before those "itching ears" start seeking false teachers. That is exactly what caused me to be convicted that I need to work to help get as much out as possible while the window of opportunity is open. Truthfully I don't feel up to that task, but I know if the Lord really wants it done that He will do it, not me. I just have to step out in trust, and I have.

 

I often wonder if others are as obtuse as I am, if God has to be as blatant with them to finally get them to understand the message.

 

Church Conflict

 

I know, I know, anybody who has gone to church any length of time has been involved or witness to churchconflict.

 

It happens.

 

 Doesn't make it any easier.

 

I went off to the Philly conference leaving behind a church that was a real family, happy and close. I miss the services Sunday because the airlines were busy giving me a guided tour of the entire United States. Okay, I'm exaggerating because I'm relatively sure we didn't fly over either Alaska or I know I would have noticed the ocean between here and Hawaii.

 

But I digress. I come back and the Music Minister, the Youth Minister and their entire extended families are conspicuously absent. In a small church like ours that's a couple of pews vacant. Pretty hard to not notice, besides the fact that a Deacon was up there leading the music Wednesday.  I start jumping them about what was going on and get the old "I can't talk about that" line.

 

That doesn't work for me. The Church belongs to the Lord, but beyond that it doesn't belong to the Pastor and the Deacons, but to the congregation. I resent being told that things like that are none of my business, and that has happened on several occassions. The government does it too, keeping so much from us as if we aren't intelligent enough to be given information, that we're better off with them just taking care of us.

 

The rumor mill has a lot of information, of course, probably much of it wrong. The music minister is one of my best friends so I talked to him at great length, but I recognize that is only one side of it.  I was a chamber of commerce manager for 26 years, a professional organization executive. I know how to manage group interaction and failing to manage the information flow to the group is not the way to handle a situation like this. We've lost some good people from the church and could lose more. It didn't have to happen that way. From what I have pieced together I don't know that I feel strongly about the situation itself, it does appear to be a church leadership problem. I do have a problem with the way communication is being handled to the congregation, like having an elephant in the room that everyone pretends is not there.

 

Barnes and Noble Test

 

We were talking on the ACFW list yesterday about  doing a panel in Philadelphia that looked at only the first page of a manuscript and the panelists would say whether they would read on or not. Chip McGreagor raised the issue that the process was a bit negative and he'd like to see it approached from a more positive angle and I had the same thought about my participation on the panel.

 

However, in the discussion we can't lose sight of the fact that one of the most significant reasons for a submission to fall flat is what I like to call the Barnes and Noble test. In a bookstore people pull that title down, look at the back cover, sample the first page, and then either put it on their short list for purchase or put it back and sample another one. Sure, they may sample some other places, but these are the only two places we can count on them looking. The job of that first page is to get them to committ to going further into the book, plain and simple.

 

I like to see a piece of action that does not conclude on the first page, a question raised that is not answered on the first page, curiousity arroused that it not satisfied on the first page, or anything that will not leave it to chance, but will compell them to go further into the book. It doesn't matter to me whether it is fiction or non-fiction, the job is still to get them off that first page as quickly as possible and down into the book.

 

Did the format we used work without hurting the feelings of those allowing their babies to be analyzed? I don't know, I suppose that is best answered by those who had their pages looked at. Was it an important session for those who are taking the final steps to send their work as submissions? You betcha.

 

I do read further to see if I connect with the work or not even if I don't think the first page gets it done. If I do I ask them to put a more compelling opening on it and send it back. If not, well, somebody else may connect with it better. It's a personal opinion.

 

Philly Report

 

The Write His Answer conference in Philladelphia was excellent. Marlene Bagnull and her people always do a great job. It was inspirationally fulfilling, content rich, and had an excellent faculty. I had the opportunity to do 45 interviews plus the unofficial meetings that always happen over meals and at off times, did two workshops and two panels, so all together I had the opportunity to interface with a lot of people. I heard some excellent pitches and had a couple of people say I gave them exactly what they came to the conference to learn. That's pretty much a divine appointment and to get the chance to do that a couple of times pretty much made my participation worthwhile.

 

The trip home was entertaining. My connection to the airport didn't quite work out so I missed my first connection. A young man by the name of Justin went way above and beyond the call of duty and managed to cut and paste a retun trip together that worked even though it took six extra hours and required a $300 upgrade. It also just lacked a couple of states taking me cost to coast then going back to Amarillo. It was very interesting.

 

To accomplish it I had to carry on my luggage which meant I had to cut back to 2 bags since I couldn't check the two I had brought. To do that I had to nestle my carryon inside the bag I had bought books in. I sold a majority of them at the conference, but still had too many to do it so I had an impromptu booksigning right at the Philly gate signing them and giving them away. We had something of a book discussion to determine who got the free books, with Justin of course getting two. Was a little expensive, but fun. I'm not sure why, but connection problems tend to happen on the return trip, never on the way to something. Saundra thinks it's because the devil always conspires to keep me from getting back to her and she tends to take it very personally.  It has happened the last five trips, one of which I just rented a car in Dallas and drove home. If Satan thinks I'm more susceptible to temptation when she isn't with me, he's wrong. She's always with me, whether physically present or not.

 

Not only with words . . .

. . . but also with power!

 

That's the theme of the writing conference here in Philly. I sit here in my motel room contemplating the people who had appointments with me, the workshops, the panels, it was a busy day. Then there were the times set aside for worship. I've done a dozen conferences so far this year with as many left to go. They have been both secular and Christian writing conferences. Having done a secular conference recently and now at a conference with a strong faith base, I realize I miss the chance to nourish my spirit even as I learn things to improve my craft when I'm not at a Chrisian conference.

 

The attitude is different. Often at other conferences I find so many who are upset because they can't get started or because their writing career is not going the way they want. They are so much in need of help and encouragement because they are on the verge of giving up. The attitude at conferences like this is so much more uplifted and encouragement abounds because of the hope that is inheirent in a faith based program.

 

At these conferences there is a constant thread of people supporting each other's work. I've so many people come up promoting someone else's work when they themselves have a project to pitch. Seldom have I had that happen at a secular conference, where things are all writing and all business.

 

It's a pleasant change, and if you have never had the opportunity to go to a Christian Writing conference  I encourage you to treat yourself and do so.

 

 

Laugh-in as a writing lesson?

 

Three times yesterday I used the "laugh-in" example to encourage someone who had just gotten a tough rejection. "Laugh-in", are you kidding me? I got such good feedback I thought I'd talk about it on the blog this morning.

 

I know, I know, a lot of you never even heard of it. It was a really popular show back in the 60's or 70's as I recall, but you can catch it now and then on a TV channel that runs nostalgia. The idea was that in one portion of the show all the people in the cast would be behind a bunch of windows on a wall. One would throw open the shutters and deliver a one liner, after which another somewhere else would open up and give the punch line. It was really funny at the time, but just yesterday it popped into my mind and I realized it was a terrific representation of the publishing industry.

 

Publishers have taken over the famous wall of windows and they throw open the shutters to a publishing opportunity. Then they get what they want and close it, and another window comes open. Getting published is all about having the right product at exactly the right place at the right time, ie when the window is open. Timing is everything. At any given point in time there may be only one window in the industry where the fit is perfect.

 

It also means there will be close calls and near misses, times when a project makes it up the ladder, so very close, but only to be beaten out in the end by a project that was just a little better fit. Lots of people get discouraged by this process and give up before they try enough windows to find the one where they fit. The ones who are successful are the ones who stay with it.

 

I've played the windows game, had shutters slammed in my face, tried to hit the open slot like trying to hit the gophers that pop up out of holes in the arcade game (another great analogy).  Well, on my way to Philly for the Write His Answer conference – hope to see you there.

 

Satan's In Your Inbox

 

Now and then a notion just strikes me. That happened this morning. I was over looking at the site stats, and I noted yesterday that I had people from Ireland, England, Canada, Australia, and a couple of places that I think are down in South America browsing around on the site. I have writing friends I talk to who are all over the world. We don't list where we're from very often so it's easy to forget what a wide range of folks we're talking to. I get proposals in from an amazing array of countries even though at present we don't have anybody working with international clients. I've always been told it is a small world, now I guess it's more true than ever.

 

It hasn't been long ago that doing this would ential having foreign "pen pals" writing letters and figuring out international postage rates if we'd have known who they were to write to them, which is unlikely. That or it would involve some very expensive phone calls or even more expensive travel. Now I know folks all over the world, talk to them often, and don't think a thing about it. I take it for granted.

 

While I'm not evangelizing most of the time as I talk to these people my faith is generally pretty clear, and hard to miss if you spend any time on my website. I know many others are much better at this type of witness than I am and every bit as far-reaching contacts as I have. The power of the internet to reach out and carry the message is awesome. Sure, it carries other stuff as well, evil stuff, that threatens my mailbox all the time.  I have some friends that get some of this and their response is to get offline so they don't have to see it. Me, I figure it's the price I have to pay for such wide-ranging contact.

 

Sure, I try to do all I can to keep it away, spam filters, technology, but the final line of defense is the delete key. These things are a reminder to me that Satan knows exactly how powerful this medium is and how important it is that we not back out and leave it to him.

 

No Guarantee of Tomorrow

 

My heart goes out to the people of Minneapolis. What a tragedy! We're praying for them.

 

The first thing that popped into my head however, is what a small assurance we have of tomorrow. There are some at the bottom of the Mississippi who were just tooling down the road, possibly without a care in the world, then boom! They didn't get up that morning planning to go meet their maker. Even worse, coming to terms with their salvation may have been something some of them had been putting off for some time, thinking there is always tomorrow. Only tomorrow isn't always there. That is the saddest thing of all.

 

We went to my 45th high school reunion a couple of years back. Had a great time, but at one point when it was time to recognize those classmates who were no longer with us we released a ballon for each as their name was called. The sky was filled with balloons, and it really made an impact on us.

 

One of our number, who became a preacher, gave a short memorial and he said it really hurt him to wonder how many of those classmates were never saved, and hurt him worse because he hadn't shared his faith with them while we were in school together because it wasn't "cool." "What if I was the one God had in mind to lead them to Him and I failed to do it?" he said. "That eats at me."

 

It isn't surprising a preacher would think that way. What is surprising is the fact that most of us there confessed we had thought the same thing many times over the years, that we were conflicted about that, and about a number of people since. "What if we were the one, and failed to get it done?"

 

Nobody on that bridge planned for that day to be their last . . . but there is just no guarantee of tomorrow for any of us.  We pray for all involved and for their families, and sincerely pray all who lost their life had their salvation secure.

 

A New Client List

 

I added a new feature on my website, a list of the clients that I'm working with. The direct link is  http://www.terryburns.net/CLIENT_LIST.htm  I have to say it has been been slow getting to this point. Even with a well established agency behind me, I figured it would take several months to find some projects I wanted to represent, several more months to get contacts working at various publishing houses (they are different  from those as a writer) and several more months getting submissions out and fielding responses. That projection proved to be pretty accurate.

 

I've gone through 640 proposals, I'm waiting on 72 of them to send me further information, have 28 here I'm working my way through, and have signed 31 clients.  I've gone to 11 conferences and have that many scheduled coming up looking for projects I like and trying to establish those editorial connections. Finally the pieces are in place and I've sent 119 proposals to over 50 editors, 69 of these proposals are still working and eleven have requested full manuscripts or have gone further through the decision process.

 

I know a number of writer friends think all you have to do to be an agent is hang out a shingle and start raking in commissions.  That's why I thought it'd be good to share a little of these stats. It's slow going and expensive to get started. Fortunately I'm not doing it for the money, but because I felt led to use my gift of encouragement to encourage other writers and to help them get their work to market.

 

I probably shouldn't be sharing all this, but I figure people know I've been doing this less than a year and might be interested in the process. And I think the people that got in on the ground floor with me are going to be happy they did.

 

 

  A Mobile Office

 
 


I have an office at home, but my real office is wherever

I happen to be. I take submissions electronically

so I can work them where I happen to be.. Some folks

send hard copies anyway and if I find myself in that

office I deal with them if they haven't gotten lost or

thrown away before then.

 

Saundra often drives while we are on trips so I can

work. I just added a wireless card to my arsenal to

allow me to do it a little better. Here we were on the way to

Lubbock to meet my daughter and grandkids (see picture) and

I'm getting and making phone calls, getting submissions and

answering them by email and sending off electronic proposals. 

I felt like a wheeler-dealer.

 

At the same time Saundra is getting calls related to her massage therapy business, and since her phone is also a PDA she's looking up her calendar and booking slots. She's on the phone with her sisters setting up a sister weekend, making airline reservations, booking rooms, doing business. We got a lot done. Technology today just blows me away.

 

After a while we looked at each other and said, "We really need to learn how to take a little time off."

 

Still that block of time in a car is too good to not use, and it really makes the trip go fast. I know my commute time in the morning and afternoon, when I have to drive, is one of my favorite prayer times. But yes, I do keep my eyes open.

 

  Ashamed of Legislators

 

I hate to say that, but it's true and has been getting worse year by year.  I'm a rare bird, a real Independent even carry a voter registration card with that on it.  I'm really interested in getting good people in office, particularly people who might take their faith with them when they go, regardless what political party they might be in.

 

Since that's the case I can throw rocks at either pary in an objective manner, and in this case it isn't hard to do. When this country was founded, they never thought there would be such a thing as a 'professional politician' with the possible exception of Thomas Jefferson. Politics was all he wanted to do. The rest that served were intended to go do their bit, then go home and live under the laws that they passed while somebody else did their service.

 

I cringe as I watch the infighting. I get the distinct opinion that the issue is never what is good for the country or what action might best represent the will of the people, but which party gets credit for doing what and what will most embarrass the other. I can't imagine what might happen if everybody was genuinely doing what our forefathers envisioned they should do. Oh, the problems they could solve.

 

There are times I just want to turn them all out and start over. Then I hear that government has gotten so complicated that new people make little contribution until they have had time to learn how things work. Is that true? Or are they simply not effective until they learn how to play the game? What if they were all new and had to actually represent the people because there were no entrenched power structure to have to cater to in order to get "inside" where they could get something done. What if we really did send them up there to represent instead of them spending all their time figuring out how to get re-elected before they are even unpacked? What if their re-election really did depend on what they did and how they represented us instead of expensive campaigns and catering to various minority groups trying to pick up votes and all sort of other political maneuvering?

 

Wow! A guy can dream, can't he?

 

To Dance in the Desert

 

 
I'm a member of the Christian Fiction Blog Alliance

now and once a week will post a review I have done

as I did with Stephen Bly's new one last week, or a

review by one of the other alliance members. This

week is one from River Oak, the publisher of my

Mysterious Ways series, To Dance in the Desert by

Kathleen Popa.

 

                                                                                                      Kathleen Popa

“Not a safe world.” How many times had she heard it over and over again? Well, it is not a safe world and Dara Murphy Brogan knew it better than most, which is exactly why she had tucked herself away on a desert mountaintop. Now it was just her, the voice inside her head and the boxes of hastily packed odds and ends—all that was left of her pathetic excuse of a life. Hadn’t she chosen the desert because it was barren and brown and dead looking and far, far away from anyone who may have seen the news?

So what was this, this trespasser, this interloper, this wacked out earth mother doing dancing outside her window? Celebrating life and the Spirit in a way Dara never could have dreamed. Until she opened her door and met Jane Cameron.

A book that makes me laugh is a joy, a book that makes me cry is a rarity. But a book that moves me to dance is sublime. To Dance in the Desert is a spectacular experience. Beautifully written, deeply moving, and warmly engaging—that this is Kathleen Popa’s first novel astounds me. That she will quickly be counted among the top caliber of Christian novelists delights me. I simply loved this book.      ~Kathryn Mackel, Author of The Hidden

Kathleen Popa creates a compelling vision of a small community’s power to coax waning spirits back toward life. This gem of a novel worked on me like a dream. Popa’s evocative prose captured the nuance and complexity of transformation with equal parts mystery and truth. She conjures the deserts of Dara Brogan’s life with intimate clarity, reminding us along the way of the profound strength of what we take far too much for granted—the deep friendship of kindred spirits. This is a journey worth taking.

     ~Jeff Berryman, Author of Leaving Ruin

 

http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/ASIN/1589190947

 

The Hair Shirt

 

A message came through loud and clear at church. One of Satan's devices is to get us to compartmentalize our lives. To put church in a box and only bring it out on Sunday. We tend to separate our church life from our private life.

 

None of us that are believers want to or intend to do this, but I suspect we all do to a degree. Yet if we are one thing at church and something else in our daily lives, doesn't that have to mean we are being false at one place or the other? Doesn't it mean we are pretending to be something we're not when we are in the house of God? Or if that isn't true are we dealing falsely with the world, hiding our light, failing to have the witness we are supposed to have?

 

But this can't mean me, I spend hours each week at church. I thought that, then in my head I heard, "This isn't talking about how many hours we spend at church or how we spend them, but how we utilize the hours outside of church." It's called being a 'Sunday Christian,' something I would never do intentionally.  But without thinking about it . . .

 

"Okay, Lord, I get it." It's a fair question and one nobody can answer for us. A true answer probably involves more and deeper self-examination than we are comfortable with. God has a way of putting a hair shirt on me occassionally until I learn what He wants me to learn. Can you imagine how uncomfortable it would be to have to wear a shirt made of hair?

 

Bottom line? It isn't what we do at church but the faith we demonstrate to the world that most closely shows our walk with the Lord.

 

   Harry Potter- Friend or Foe?

 

I know there is a debate among Christians as to whether Harry Potter promotes sorcery or other things we shouldn't be presenting to our kids. I get that. And I'm not getting into that debate here. I want to talk about something else. The book is blowing the doors off the bookstores, no doubt about it. Is that a good thing or bad?

 

I hear the argument about a blockbuster that "if they weren't paying so much for that book they'd have more money to start fledging authors or promote midlist authors." Is that true? I don't think it is. I think it's these big hits that generate the revenue that allows publishers to take a chance on some other projects, books they hope they can develop.

 

Is it fair for somebody with a big name to make big money off such a book particularly when often the book is not very well done or more likely than not written by somebody else? Not suggesting Harry falls in this class but I can think of some politicians who do. For the answer see above paragraph.

 

I think there is something else that enters into the Harry Potter debate. Kids, particularly our 'reluctant reader boys' spend so much time with video games, iPods, TV and other sources of entertainment that as Thomas Nelson CEO Michael Hyatt said in his blog, "It's hard to catch them with a book in their hands." He pointed out how much more difficult the competition for their time has become. And I came away from ICRS with another thought stuck in my mind, one put there by Nancy Lohr of Journey Forth Books. She said if we didn't lure kids into reading with fiction and with books that enticed them so they did become readers, how much more difficult does that make it to get them to read the Bible. Harry Potter is making kids read by the millions, many of whom read little else.

 

That's opening the door and we need to redouble our efforts to ensure they go on to pick up other books. If we are one who doesn't think Harry is the appropriate fare, we need to follow it up with books that are every bit as appealing without the elements we might object to.  Isn't that our job?

 

 

 
One Step Over the Border

 

I don't recommend books here often.

I should do more of it. Stephen sent me his

new one and I read it in one sitting.

I thoroughly enjoyed the tongue-in-cheek

humor an